NafaKitty

Thank you for the review! I'm actually overhauling the entire book now. Hopefully, the new version will be much better than this one. I would write in chapters, however it ...

I'm actually overhauling the entire book now. Heh. Hopefully, the new version will be a lot better. ^_^

I will be working on better descriptions and characterizations when I rewrite this. I am aware of the fact that Omegas are not the lowest rank in an ACTUAL wolf ...

I'll work on the grammar and the other things you pointed out, thank you! And I don't write in chapters. I've just been posting every ten pages as I write ...

That works a lot better! It gives a little away without giving away TOO much. It adds a really nice mystery element. Makes the reader wonder to themselves "Why would ...

It's a REALLY good first draft. I think it, and you, have a lot of potential!

It was, I found it fun and adorable. :)

Thanks! I actually have the next 3 parts written...just need to do enough reviews to post them lol

I also just edited it, it should sound a lot better now :D

Thank you! ^_^ I haven't written any poetry in a while, I'm gonna try to start writing poetry some more.

@Sapphireluna Yeah, I know. I'm going to be dividing it up into chapters after I finish it completely. :)

I actually have the whole thing in the novel workshop. I don't typically write in a chapter format because it ruins my flow for writing. I see the things you're ...

I've actually just replaced this with the edit just now. So if you wish to re-read it and review again, that'd be awesome. I didn't change much, just added a ...

I've edited it if you wish to read over the edit. It's nothing huge or anything, just changed a few things around.

Ahhh okay. Then that makes more sense lol