NaRachel

Wow...didn't think this one would ever get reviewed! Thanks for your help :)

Hey :) I liked this, the ending line was fantastic! It doesn't bother me that im not really sure what its about because the color's are vivid enough to keep ...

Hi :) I thought this was excellent! Really fun to read, I especially liked the parts that kept repeating, giving it a nice pattern :) I also like the idea ...

Hi :) I really liked this! Personally I thought the idea was a little bit 'done before ' but as a song I think that doesn't matter as much. The ...

Wow, this is amazing! I can't find any faults, it just seeps emotion. Well done!

Hey I admire your enthusiasm with posting so much, but just keep in mind that people aren't going to review all of them when you post so much :)

Thanks, you're right it is confusing :)

Haahhahahahahahahhaha I totally lol'd at the "sorry about your birdie" Thanks for the laughs XD

Does the ground not fascinate you too? :P

So apparently this is already a song...

Yay :) You wrote about something real this time :) It really shows, this song is complex and conflicted - like a real person. ( I'm not saying I don't ...

Just adding to that I absolutely.love the " do not you want to "

I meant "cliche " damn autocorrect :)

Awesome and no problems, now your poem is as pretty and sad as a forlorn flower. Haha ok I know that's lame. Anyway good job :)

Just realised i completely forgot to put in the italics- no wonder it didn't make sense! Thanks for pointing this out to me :) I added some more breaks too.