NLPrincess13

Nice Work! I like it a lot... the beat is fit well too! "My plan after school is to join the army But it seems like I can't, it's not ...

oh! Very Strong sensation there! i like the serenity you achieve with words to thrive the floe, even though the emotions is heavy! My favourite line: "They came to me ...

i like it a lot! i think it's every one worst enemy! specially girls!!! i like your flow and the emotion there very strong!, nice poem you accomplished :D Favorite ...

it's very well!! wow it's so emotional, i love this piece than the last one! it's good,again very good.....i want to hear it now! can I? just small opinion. the ...

well! i can feel the emotion, and i can sense the flow too. i like it, but you can do some extra look in the last (ending)stanza to maintain the ...

looooooooove it :D i truly deeply madly like it. i love the flow in the verses, the chorus. i want to hear it Ox! it's really good one and i ...

i like it, i guess it's a bit of rap! you didn't stick with the grammar and punctuation rules, it's the style of rap,right?! the flow of emotion clearly shows ...

i think you might did better, first the flow doesn't exist!! you need to consider your dividing to stanzas. i mean the emotion was whinning. you lost the rue feelings ...

first of all, well done i like your style very much! i love the poem. the flow of the emotion perfectly matching the meaning, i like the subject point too! ...

I felt I'm watching tinker bell or something. the plot is very good, i like your idea of it.... love it, it should be part 2 or something! :D keep ...

i with "DreamWalker" it should be moved to the general fiction ! i loved it , it's realistic and sadly it is! any way well done, i love it once ...

well, it's good piece, but i think you can do better. yes it makes sense as (the reviewers mentioned). the flow was good! but, you can add some back up ...

well it's featured now! isn't it? any way i love love love it! good choice, it fits me too perfectly! i laugh it out loud while reading cause it was ...

first of all, i have to read it twice to get it like it should be and it worth it! *raise my hat* Well done with your choice of stanzas. ...

hi, first i loved it, truly loved it. my heart twitch and i got goose bumps(in good way of course). i loved it *standing ovation* miss, EM. i love the ...