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I liked Tom Sawyer but I haven't tried reading Huckleberry Finn yet--will let you know my thoughts on it afterwards.

Hello! For the revised version you should definitely add description and character action. They're not just standing there delivering their lines like, say, robots and this should also give an ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * 'Bring me the girl.' Maybe other girl would be better since the robots are getting rid of a different girl ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Her boots thudded against the plush carpet as she trooped the other side of the hallway. Thudded? Plush carpet? Sound ...

This should be in the fiction section, not here.

Oh shiny. This is a very pretty poem to read. I love the images coming to mind of autumn and particularly love the second stanza.

I actually liked this, all of it is so true unfortunately. Nothing to add that would help you improve it apart from the typos I noticed — 'no' instead of ...

Seraph Tree : First, his owner says something about a makeover. Is she talking about herself or Felix? She’s referring to Felix. The first line was actually a clue to ...

I'm a big sister and I know my mother tells my younger sister to not grow up like me! Harsh. Naturally I liked this and my sister does too. To ...

I didn't really understand what you were trying to say until I got to the last three lines which, for me, would have been great without the other parts.

It was nice and short. To me this seems perfect for wedding vows.

I love the part about the trees and such pretty words you've used make it something you could read more than once. Also I liked how the first and last ...

It sounds like a short story, a little amusing. Though, in my opinion, perhaps you could have written what the man says in his accent?

Wonderful, Cal! =]

I remember the piggies! Yellow and brown have never been my favourite colour, in fact, it reminds me of mustard. otherwise I love the FAQ page your mascots.