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Re: Our Love
I honestly love this. It's a very touching piece that I feel a lot of people could be able to relate to. The emotion in it was real and raw, ...
Oct 8, 2013 -
Re: Jealousy
Back again! Here to review your revised work ;). I can't remember too much about it originally, since I haven't seem this in a while, but I have to say, ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Longing
Wow, this is absolutely stunning, especially for a first work. The emotion in it was raw and I could really feel your pain. Your vocabulary was nice and felt quite ...
Sep 17, 2013 -
Re: Daddy
Awwww, so cute! I know you posted this a little while ago, but I was just strolling around this site randomly, and when I found this title I couldn't resist ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: My First Love
Wow, this is a wonderful interpretation of first love. Its starts out so wonderful when the love begins, but becomes sad once it ends. I wish I could say that ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: I thought
Wow, amazing poem!!! Seriously, the rhyming is perfect and just felt so natural. Everything flowed smoothly and I found little to no grammatical errors! I really liked the message you ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: Dreammaker Part 1 - Boy or Girl?
Oooh, this seems really interesting! I absolutely LOVED that Meg character, and I'm very interested in seeing more of her. The fact that the narrator first thought she was a ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: The Clock
I actually really like this. Short and sweet and to the point :). I just have to point out, though, in the line "To try and mesure me," the word ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: I Wanted to Say
Wow, this is completely beautiful. I absolutely love it. This is truly how I feel all the time, and Im amazed about how well you could capture it on paper. ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: Aye, Aye Captain
Haha, I can honestly say that I liked this story a lot! It was nice and funny and it made me smile. I noticed a really big improvement in your ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: Perfect Men
Love this :). The whole thing just flowed so beautifully and the rhymes felt extremely natural. It's quite short, but I feel that it is better that way anyway. I ...
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: Answer this.
Oh my gosh, this is just too amazing! Honestly, I'm stunned. Everything about it was just perfect. I noticed a few errors here and there, but they were so little ...
Sep 9, 2013 -
Re: Dreams.
Great poem! Honestly, I really liked it. It portrayed a lot of emotion, both positive and negative, and really flows wonderfully across the page. Dreams are always a wonderful topic ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: After Life
Great work! I really enjoyed this story, and I thought you did a great job with it. It was unique and creative and very well done. What I would suggest ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Faking Perfect
Wow, this is amazing! It's short and sweet, woven with just the right amount of emotion and beauty. At the beginning of this piece, the reader thinks that Cora tries ...
Sep 6, 2013
