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This is so funny. I totally get where you're coming from bro but I've got to say this poem about you being angry at your mom actually made me smile. ...

I like this. I think it's one of the most legit things I've read on this site. It's very revealing about how the next generation operates. I think this is ...

I like the pattern you made with having every stanza around the same size and how there are dots separating them. I think you could use some commas at the ...

I absolutely LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The passion, the comedy, the romance, the tension, the action, the horror; all of it is amazing! You really did a good job with that introduction: ...

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Wow. That was really good, kind've dark, and action packed (All things I'm okay with). I thought it was really interesting how you developed Garretts thought process on how he ...

I love this soooo much! It's all about the little moments and your poem clearly shows me this. My favorite part is the second stanza when you say "I'll sketch ...

Wow. That was really good, kind've dark, and action packed (All things I'm okay with). I thought it was really interesting how you developed Garretts thought process on how he ...

Oh my gosh! That was amazing! The way you started with the whole conversation between Garrett and Zaire was great and that cliffhanger has got me wanting more! Can't wait ...

That was good and I loved the comedy in it. I think if you keep on writing you could have a great story. I'd love to see where it's going. ...