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Hello! Music here to critique your "Dream". :) Grammar: [s]It was the only sound in the room that I could hear.[/s] It was the only perceptible noise in the room. ...

Via, that is terrible. I'm so sorry you had to go through that. Congratulations on being brave enough to write it out; I hope it brought you comfort or clarity ...

Music here to critique for you! Grammar: [alexandria] Cat, darling, capitalize this, you silly girl! Oh , no “It’s been a year.” Can it be year ? :wink: “Maybe she ...

Here as requested, my darling! Grammar: He didn't understand this[s],[/s] ; he didn't care enough to try and understand it. It was nearly the end of the school year, and ...

First review! *happy dances* Here to critique again! Grammar: This month, however, I'd convinced him to try something new , so he'd moved one step down the rainbow, so to ...

Kat! *hugs* You should have dropped by my Will Review For Food thread and told me about this! Haha; no matter. Onward with the review! Grammar: It runs its course ...

Hi! I'm Music. Grammar: Being an elf , he had a better sense of smell than any human . "They're moving," she whispered , thrashing back her long hair. Niva ...

Teague! Hi, there! I'm Music. Here to review. :) Grammar: Yesterday , she had left a plastic container in the fridge with her name written in blue ink on its ...

Hi, Hannah! Music here to review. :) Grammar: SOMETIMES, STAYING IN ONE PLACE Caps! They burn! for too long is the only way you can ever feel anything. I was ...

Hiya, darling! Music here. Finally time for a review! Thorough, as promised. :wink: As he crossed the finish line , he smiled with pride , and then looked towards the ...

June! I'm back! And actually reviewing instead of an I.O.U. this time! Hehe... Time for the promised thorough review! “Hey, [s]d[/s] D ad, it’s me. Jill.” “I know, [s]d[/s] D ...

Meep! Hello, darling! Music here. :) A bony finger stabbed the bright, flashing , red button, as if it had offended her greatly. The speaker crackled to life and static ...

June, darling! I finally got the time to sit down and critique. You deserve critiques, my dear! So here Music is to supply one. :) If they don’t go to ...

Hi, Whispers! Music here. Love is the spring that never runs dry, Even when it's burning. Love is the only truthful lie: The one secret worth learning. I love this ...

Evi, dear! *hugs* Wonderful story. You managed to include her whole situation so you didn't leave the reader wondering, until the very end when you stop at the climax. (I ...