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Thanks Piranha, im glad you liked it! Yeah, i did think about using the scientific name, but i wasn't sure if that would perhaps make it too obvious that it ...

Yeah, you're like...mindblowingly good for your age. You're mindblowingly good for MY age. Seriously though, you are by far one of the best writers on this site and i can ...

Its not inedible lol, its indelible. Meaning "cannot be removed". Thanks for the comment though after all this time. x

I love it. I really do. The fact i got to hear you read it really personalised it as well. As Sam says, it really is beautifully written. Where are ...

Woo thanks for the reply. I guess should make the context a bit clearer though. Belladonna is a poisonous plant (the same as Deadly Nightshade). Her "purple trumpets" are therefore ...

I seem to remember the first three books being only softback when they were first released, and Goblet of Fire was the first to be released in hardback. Nope, the ...

ITS BRILLIANT. I cried...like FOUR TIMES. especially the first death....lol..seriously. I WANNA READ IT AGAIN. I cant determine whether i liked it better than the half blood prince. Both were ...

I liked the picture you created, its beautiful. The only repetition that bothered me was the word "sorrow" . Its a good first attempt, i think the title needs work ...

This is sweet, i like it. However, i think you should use less exclamation marks as they take away some of the meaning behind the words. Good work though, keep ...

Never scrap it. It makes more sense once you read the afterword. I think it starts off well, but gets a bit misguided. Maybe you could find a different, more ...

I liked it too. It was yummy. The 2nd stanza was my favourite. Except, i felt it ended quite suddenly. TOO suddenly maybe, like there should have been more. However, ...

AHHH GOODBYEE YWS!

Yeah i agree with matty b, I love how you spelt out the word home too. I think the first line flows ok, but i think the "oh my god" ...

No commenter.. Very pretty, and good concept. I dont really see much wrong with it, except for the typo in the last stanza. Yup, good work.

No commenter again... The rhyming at first, doesnt seem forced...but then the last three lines just confused me.. That it was a Bunch of Smack! huh? I dont get it. ...