Muse

wellll... As for being a hard movie to make: well, it's certainly not the longest. Actually, it's the shortest of all the hardback Harry Potter's (4, 5, 6 and 7). ...

*head explodes* This totally got that rihanna song stuck in my head. Hm...i dont think it was a really complex idea. I think it was quite a simple idea really. ...

i love it, seriously. Especially the line: "Water slipped into the tinted dome of the porch light, as if to hide" Its refreshing actually, you dont often see poems like ...

I agree with Liz, you could work on your choice of words. However, saying that, i do like the simplicity of it all..XD. I guess it depends what you're going ...

"was suddenly aware of how full they weer" Im guessing that's supposed to be "were". and... "Your kisses were exctacy" should be spelt "ecstasy" Apart from those small errors, i ...

I reaaaaallly like this. There's something about it that just draws me in. I cant really think of much to say in terms of constructive crit, except that im not ...

Yeah im not too keen on the "(a tap a tap a tap)" bits. However, i do like the first two stanzas. Im not sure if they really fit in ...

One of the things i really liked about it was that it was such a light read. People are so fixed on being overly descriptive etc it becomes so heavy ...

I just dont know why you dont get any comments, because your poems are beautiful! I dont have any crit for it. Its amongst the best i've read on here ...

and ANOTHER no commenter! Really.. Nice and personal, good flow and rhythm..simple language and not too complex. All good! The only thing is..i think that When you know what you ...

Way hay, another no commenter! You are a very good poet. I've read some of your work, and blimey its good. The rhyming doesn't feel forced, but at the end ...

Another no commenter! Nice imagery...It's pretty. Almost flawless flow..except for the end stanza which seems to get into a muddle. Instead, i think it should be written out like this.. ...

I've been wandering through the forums looking for work which has no comments and i stumbled upon this. Certainly well written. Even though it's lengthy, it doesn't diminish the quality ...

Honestly, what is with all these poems with no comments?! This piece is extremely well written. Unlike many poems you see, the rhyming is not forced, it sounds very natural ...

Why has this no comments?! Sheesh! Well anyway, this is ace. I love how it switches from english to french (and i love it even more that i can understand ...