Muse

I agree that the poem might be a bit too long, and that you should check over your spelling because it can be rather confusing. I like what you're attempting ...

Well this is a bit different, and I dont like seeing people's efforts going uncommented. I've got to say though, im not sure if i fully understand it. But hey, ...

Blacktiger, was there any need to quote the whole poem for that one comment? I think not. Anyway, the spaces were a bit unnecessary. However, I did quite like the ...

Dont change the word homosexuality. As usual with your work, i liked it a lot. I love the opening paragraph especially, its just so visual. Well im proving rather useless, ...

No replies..why ever not? I like this, its very easy to read. I like the imagery of the wind and eagles in the opening stanza. It creates a very distinct ...

Brilliantly raw. There is no fussing around, its straight to the point and i LOVE it for it. I read the story behind it on your blog, but even if ...

Its better than my first poem, I'll tell you that. You've chosen a very safe structure, which should be re-thought. It creates a flatness which takes away from the meaning ...

This is interesting. Im not sure i understand it though it must be said. First off, great imagery. It creates an almost uncomfortable tension which i love in poems. I ...

Im useless at reviewing prose. I dont have the dedication for it. I'll give it a go though, seeing its you. ;) And since im rubbish, you dont need to ...

This is good. The only problem i have with it, is that it could possibly have too many questions right bang in the centre. I know you've gone for the ...

Yeah, if a poem is going to be short, it needs to be really hard-hitting to leave an impression. I think what Chevy and Matt says is right, this could ...

The rhyme scheme is a bit temperamental. I thought you had established one in the first stanza, but it didnt remain constant like i thought it might. For instance, in ...

wheee, i really like this. I mean, its a little cliche (only a little), but its pretty and i like pretty. I particularly like the last stanza, as you've made ...

Hmm this is pretty good. I think there could potentially be too many questions in it though. I'm not sure if they add positively to the tone of the piece. ...

hmmm, I do like this, i think. Is there an error here? : Have you heard or Paris, Or is Equal all you can conjure? is it supposed to be ...