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Re: Shadows; Part 3 of Entry 5
I will np
Mar 28, 2019 -
Re: Prologue
REALLY i LOVE You already. lol
Mar 28, 2019 -
Re: She belongs to the moon (second part of chapter 1)
I love the imagery and the context of the chapter. For a draft I think it is very good. I love the way you made me feel the characters emotions ...
Mar 27, 2019 -
Re: Pensacola Star - 1.2
I love the way that you created a precise chapter. It was well thought out and it had well tone words that as authors we want to use that. But ...
Mar 27, 2019 -
Re: Hold Onto Life
Thank you for your advice
Mar 27, 2019 -
Re: Hold Onto Life
Okay Okay I will
Mar 27, 2019 -
Re: Prologue
How is that to all my readers and people giving me great cristism
Mar 25, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (18)
Okay I love the way the plot went along the way. I loved the way you made me on the edge of my seat. I think you did an excellent ...
Mar 8, 2019 -
Re: Prologue
thanks
Mar 8, 2019 -
Re: Prologue
How's that now. Is it much better than the last one
Mar 8, 2019 -
Re: Prologue
Thanks for the criticism and np
Mar 8, 2019 -
Re: silver neck
Your right and I am very sorry I didn't know that please forgive me
Mar 8, 2019 -
Re: Hold Onto Life
I actually am basing it off of Kelly Clarkson's Piece by Piece and Andy Grammer"s Don't Give Up On Me
Mar 7, 2019 -
Re: The Consultation
Okay first of all I loved it. I especially loved how you put a flashback and as authors we want to give our audience the most details we can without ...
Mar 7, 2019 -
Re: The Day We First Met
OMG I love how you were able to relate to the readers. Jeez you related to me. I really loved it. Good job keep it up
Mar 1, 2019