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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Shadows; Part 3 of Entry 5

    I love it. I love the way you were able to describe the scenes and for a author like me that is sometimes hard but I love how you did ...

    Mar 27, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Lost Dragon 15.1

    Okay so first of all I love that you are adding depth and imagery into your stories. I love the tone and the way you described the scenes of where ...

    Mar 27, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: She belongs to the moon (second part of chapter 1)

    I love the imagery and the context of the chapter. For a draft I think it is very good. I love the way you made me feel the characters emotions ...

    Mar 27, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Politics Re: Pensacola Star - 1.2

    I love the way that you created a precise chapter. It was well thought out and it had well tone words that as authors we want to use that. But ...

    Mar 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Am i falling in love with her

    Oh My god! I loved the poem. It literally made me cry. I loved the way you used imagery and a little bit of illustrations. It was like you were ...

    Mar 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Soul Keeper chapters 2-4

    I really did feel frightened. But in a good way. I loved your use of imagery and tone words. You made me want more and I was literally on the ...

    Mar 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I Hope You Know

    OMG! This cut me deeply. I felt the revenge and anger in this poem. As an author we want to use words that express the way we feel without using ...

    Mar 8, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: simply blue

    Same as my other review I Honestly don't see anything and it is very disappointing. No offense but don't post anything if you don't write anything. Maybe that's why no ...

    Mar 7, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: silver neck

    Honestly I don't see anything and it is very disappointing. No offense but don't post anything if you don't write anything. Maybe that's why no one is bothering to post ...

    Mar 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: Sognore 3.0

    Ohhh I love the way you made me shiver in anticipation and how you made me really want to know more. As an author it is our job to keep ...

    Mar 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Kelly

    I love romance novels and anything romance so automatically I love you. i love the way you were able to portray the romance so that the reader could be enticed. ...

    Mar 7, 2019
  • Other » General, General Re: [DELETED]​

    Okay so first of all if your English teacher didn't give you an A+ than he is crazy because I love it. I love the way you expressed the witches ...

    Mar 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Delta - 21.1

    OMG I loved it! Lol I loved the way you were able to engage me in the story and as an author we want to do that. I really enjoyed ...

    Mar 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 13.1

    Okay so I really enjoyed it. I loved the suspense that you created and as authors we want to do that. I also enjoyed the imagery that you put in ...

    Mar 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: The Consultation

    Okay first of all I loved it. I especially loved how you put a flashback and as authors we want to give our audience the most details we can without ...

    Mar 7, 2019


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