MrWriter39

First let me say there is a lot of truth that goes into this, not many people get or understand the emotional stress people go through when loving someone else ...

Hey Lylas i've gotta admit this is a pretty sad intro but I guess it goes along with the title. I will say that for me; the story kinda jumps ...

Hey Timmy me again and so far like I've said in my previous reviews that this story seems really interesting. First I gotta say that i'm having a little trouble ...

Now this is getting interesting more than it already was First off: Adding the changes definitely helps with the story Secondly: This story is very interesting especially with HQ great ...

Hey Timmy I just read the second part of this little series you got going on here and I just have to say you are an excellent writer and I ...

Im a little teary eyed after reading this. Very emotional and heartfelt, I found myself somewhat connected to the main character even though it was a short story. I like ...

WOW! this could be a great opening to a bigger story. I like it a lot but feel like it needs a tad bit more detail. It sounds very traumatizing ...

This poem was very emotional and I can tell it meant a lot to you. Seeing emotions brought out like this really shows the best in writers. I like the ...