Morticiansdaughter19

Yea it was suppose to be stronger lol my badness! and thank you I will definitely fix those errors! :)

Thank you so much! I totally get what you are saying I will look into changing it :)

Thank you so much! and yes they are my favorite band! BVBarmy for life! :)

Thank you so much, and I didn't even notice that I will definitely fix it! :)

I really liked this review and the last one of yours! it is very helpful and I get what you are saying completely! thank you so much :)

Thank you so much I get exactly what you are saying! that was an excellent and very helpful review! :)

i think its a wonderful poem it is very interesting!i just think if you change the format the rythme will be easier to understand :)

I love the personification in this poem! very unique. It carries a good rhythm too. you did an excellent job with this poem. and it is very creative, I haven't ...

Wow I didn't even notice it was a haiku but in that case yes the length is perfect I really liked it!!

no prob!

I Love this poem, but more specifically I like the last stanza the rhythm flows the best. I couldn't find any errors which is great so keep doing what your ...

Thank you so much! I really appreciate you reading it and I'm glad you liked it!

That was really good! the rhythm was great! Just one thing too point out, stanza 2 last line the "Way" at the end shouldn't be capitalized. Same goes for "Guide" ...

And also thank you defyinggravity01 I would say it is more of a prose poem for know I might change it so it has stanzas and add on to it ...