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Morrigan

Morrigan

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Devil's Day

    -_- My computer did something weird, and this showed up as a reply to EscapeToNeverland's review. Hold shift when you press enter when making a line break, and when you ...

    May 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Devil's Day

    Hey, Lornthalas, hold shift when you press enter when making a line break, and when you want a stanza break, hit enter without shift.

    May 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Grassland, Horizon, Sky-- Chapter I

    Thanks for the review! It was really helpful! I'm glad that you found things to improve on, as this is only my first draft, after all. Thanks so much for ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Hipsters and Goldfish

    I wrote this when hipsters were not "mainstream." It's a product of a different era xD

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: you taught me to scrape moon-dust off the moon

    What the knick knack paddy whack? How did you even write this? Lord almighty.

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: For official purposes, these children do not exist

    Okay. Fun definition, timmyjake, but I don't know why you're telling me that ^_^

    May 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Rite of Spring

    Thanks for the review! The semi-colon was misused because I have been studying Shakespeare recently, and Shakespeare certainly used punctuation in different ways than we do. A semi-colon symbolizes th

    May 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Wren

    Moo, I knew that definition, but in my mind's ear (if that makes sense) it always was a long wail, so it didn't really go with my vision. If it's ...

    May 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Party Haiku

    Ah! What about "right after"? A solution! Huzzah!

    May 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Rite of Spring

    You always nail me right in the spots I hope no one notices XD Thanks for the awesome review!

    May 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Falling

    Yep, I saw that you found it lurking in the note, but in case you wanted to revise it and turn it into a better poem, I gave it my ...

    May 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: Here Be Dragons

    Ah! If you're having issues with formatting, the key to this program on YWS is to hold shift when you hit enter to make it single spaced. Then, when you ...

    May 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Moby Dick

    Thanks so much for your in depth review on my poem! Your suggestions have been noted, and I'll definitely work on those things. Thanks, Obama!

    May 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Where I am From

    I understand that, but if after your assignment is finished, you wish to edit it further, these are some things to take into consideration.

    May 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: A Change of Power and the Queen

    Actually, we had to leave my grandmother's house. She was paying the bills left over from my grandfather's stay in the hospital, but still gave me money. So really, she's ...

    May 3, 2014


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