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Re: The Devil's Day
-_- My computer did something weird, and this showed up as a reply to EscapeToNeverland's review. Hold shift when you press enter when making a line break, and when you ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: The Devil's Day
Hey, Lornthalas, hold shift when you press enter when making a line break, and when you want a stanza break, hit enter without shift.
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Grassland, Horizon, Sky-- Chapter I
Thanks for the review! It was really helpful! I'm glad that you found things to improve on, as this is only my first draft, after all. Thanks so much for ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Hipsters and Goldfish
I wrote this when hipsters were not "mainstream." It's a product of a different era xD
May 18, 2014 -
Re: you taught me to scrape moon-dust off the moon
What the knick knack paddy whack? How did you even write this? Lord almighty.
May 18, 2014 -
Re: For official purposes, these children do not exist
Okay. Fun definition, timmyjake, but I don't know why you're telling me that ^_^
May 13, 2014 -
Re: The Rite of Spring
Thanks for the review! The semi-colon was misused because I have been studying Shakespeare recently, and Shakespeare certainly used punctuation in different ways than we do. A semi-colon symbolizes th
May 12, 2014 -
Re: Wren
Moo, I knew that definition, but in my mind's ear (if that makes sense) it always was a long wail, so it didn't really go with my vision. If it's ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: Party Haiku
Ah! What about "right after"? A solution! Huzzah!
May 11, 2014 -
Re: The Rite of Spring
You always nail me right in the spots I hope no one notices XD Thanks for the awesome review!
May 11, 2014 -
Re: The Falling
Yep, I saw that you found it lurking in the note, but in case you wanted to revise it and turn it into a better poem, I gave it my ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: Here Be Dragons
Ah! If you're having issues with formatting, the key to this program on YWS is to hold shift when you hit enter to make it single spaced. Then, when you ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: Moby Dick
Thanks so much for your in depth review on my poem! Your suggestions have been noted, and I'll definitely work on those things. Thanks, Obama!
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Where I am From
I understand that, but if after your assignment is finished, you wish to edit it further, these are some things to take into consideration.
May 3, 2014 -
Re: A Change of Power and the Queen
Actually, we had to leave my grandmother's house. She was paying the bills left over from my grandfather's stay in the hospital, but still gave me money. So really, she's ...
May 3, 2014
