Morrigan

Hi there. Welcome to YWS! I'm going to begin by saying you should format this in a more poetical manner. Make lines and stanzas instead of sentences and paragraphs. Here, ...

Hi there. Lovely book. Lovely author. I'm going to disregard everything in that lovely author's lovely book while reviewing this. A poem should stand on its own, no matter what ...

Hi there. (I'll try to leave some pieces intact). As Kyllorac said before, you meant "quiet" instead of "quite." Now that that's out of my system... Honestly, it does sound ...

Hi there. Lord, have you got words. This is the kind of poetry that requires slow reading. I love your words and the pacing they provide. Your layout, too, is ...

Hi there. (I decided to check out some of your stuff, since you looked at mine). Well, this certainly made me chuckle. I love all the sign mentions (or sine, ...

Hi there. This is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I enjoy your premise. Hope is a complex thing, and many poems have been written about it. It ...

Hi there. disclaimer: I don't usually review short stories. I usually review poetry. If I seem a little harsh, it's because I'm used to nitpicking. I like the story. It's ...

Hi there, and welcome to YWS. I'm glad you've chosen to join us. (one of us! one of us!) This is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Hmm. ...

Hi there. I like the subject matter and the narration. It's an interesting concept that I'm sure many people can say that they've been in a situation similar to this ...

Hi there. I really love some of the images you've conjured here. "tattoo its way through your skin/ a permanent scar in the making" is my favorite part. I love ...

Hi there. While this poem has potential (it has an idea that continues throughout the poem), it needs a lot of work. There are no images. None. When I read ...

Wow. Quite a set up for a pun ya got there.

Hi there. Oh my goodness the last stanza. Whoa. Your first stanza is great, too. This whole poem is pretty great in general, actually. The only things I would look ...

Hi there. Lovely. I like what you did with the time progression and shoes. It's not direct at all, and really makes the reader think. Nice job. A few notes ...

Let's take this moment to revel in the silence you've given me. I'm very glad I chose to read this before going to bed. I was going to get off ...