Morrigan

Fraey, The tone of this poem is lovely. It's unhurried, not really hurt, but floating above the feelings of this other person, taking it in and realizing you knew what ...

Niteowl with the truth, as always. This is the perfect length, but also I want more of it. Validate my sad retail experience! Your use of italics for the copypasta ...

Bellarke, This is a lovely little lighthearted poem. I appreciate the sentiment, and I like that you kept the same lilting tone throughout the piece. That being said, this poem ...

FORT HOLY COW You know how much I hate rhyme schemes, but this is so good it's like cream cheese on banana bread. Your meter is what makes it. In ...

Yoo Hatt I'm coming out of my cave to offer my opinion Man I can dig this concept but your execution isn't quite doing it for me. I know that ...

Heyo, Kyll. Really nice imagery here. I like the direction you took the idea in, as well. While this is all definitely a fantastical thought of a relationship, I felt ...

Ah, unrequited love. This really brings me back, marms. Nice job on the nostalgia bit. I think that this is a very easy topic to relate to, which is why ...

Hey there gxldencrxwns, I'm dropping in to leave you a review! I think that this is an interesting concept, and I think that the repetition actually works quite well in ...

All right, bruh, you asked for brutal, so here we go. *fires up the grill* Dang son, you were right, this is sappy. I did enjoy parts of it, but ...

Heyo Kayla, how's it going? I'm here to review this poem, as you requested. To answer your specific questions: I don't think that you should worry too much about length ...

Hi there BubblegumGoddess, I'm here to leave a review for you. I like the theme that you've chosen to meditate on. Finding one's purpose is a common theme. I would ...

Hey Stormcloud! I've dropped by to review your poem. I like the theme that you're portraying here. I think it's a worthy endeavor to present a memory and say it's ...

Yoooooooooooooooo Apricity! Here to review as I promised. From a first read-through, I really like what you've got going on here. All the images you use are really refreshing, and ...

Hi there Lord Anzius! I don't believe we've met before, but welcome back to YWS! You've got an impressive number of YWS years under your belt. I'm not sure if ...

Heyo Nikayla, stopping by to review. I think that this is a tragedy. I don't understand how you can disrespect the art form that is Poetry like this. Of course ...