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Re: how to discern gardens from woodland
Hello Coffeeism, I don't think I've ever thought so deeply about gardening before. I never even thought about how old gardens are. Because of this poem, I find myself on ...
May 29, 2019 -
Re: The Peri Queen Part 2
Hello again! Let's get down to it. I was having trouble putting my finger on what this reminded me of, and then when the Dryads didn't receive the sight of ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: The Peri Queen Part 1
Heyo toboldlygo! Morri here to rescue you from the Green Room! This took me a second to get into, but I ended up enjoying this quite a bit. I haven't ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: Wait For Me - Chapter 2 (With A Crash)
Ahoy, Silver. Blue team reporting for duty to get your piece out of the Green Room! I'll get right down to business. This feels disjointed. The very beginning of this ...
May 26, 2019 -
Re: Wings- Chapter 2
Heyo Starry, blue team here to get you out of the Green Room! This definitely filled me with nostalgia. I couldn't help thinking of the first couple of times I ...
May 26, 2019 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 27
Hello Panikos, blue team here to get you out of the Green Room! First of all, this good. I like this. This is the first chapter I've read all day ...
May 26, 2019 -
Re: Shadows; Part 1 of Entry 5
Hey AmadeusW, blue team here to get you out of the Green Room! Even though I haven't read the rest of this work, I liked your descriptions of your surroundings, ...
May 26, 2019 -
Re: Delta - 21.3
Hello! Blue team here to get you out of the green room! I know I haven't read any of the previous chapters of this piece, but sometimes it's good to ...
May 26, 2019 -
Re: Hypocrite
Heyo Riellehn. I'm Morrigan, and I'm here to review your poem. I see that you say this poem is close to your heart down below. I have had poems like ...
May 24, 2019 -
Re: Google: trans man with long hair
Heyo Dougal. I'm Morrigan, and I'm here to review your poem. Dang, you've posted a lot of prose on this site! I was wondering why we hadn't crossed paths before, ...
May 24, 2019 -
Re: White Wolf
Hello CorvusQueen, I dig this! I like poems about nature, and this one has a clear, cohesive theme that works with the subject without stating it (the idea of the ...
May 12, 2019 -
Re: Inside and Out: A Self-Portrait
Hello lelu, I stopped by because I noticed that this didn't have any reviews even though you posted it yesterday. I know why-- this is daunting. I perused a bit ...
May 12, 2019 -
Re: True poetry is in the drafts
Yo Leviari, how's it goin'? My dude, I let out an audible "oof" after the first stanza because it hit hard. I can't remember the last time I scribbled something ...
May 9, 2019 -
Re: bullying.
Hello, seekingthetruth. I've felt the same way as you at times! This poem really reminds me of when I was in middle school, and dealt with a lot of people ...
May 8, 2019 -
Re: mango
Hey man, This is wonderful. The imagery is specific and you use all the right words to convey this warm, nostalgic feeling. You really brought me into the world of ...
May 8, 2019
