Morrigan

Hi there, RoyalHighness! Morrigan here for a review. It seems to me like you were going for a villanelle, but this isn't quite a villanelle. A villanelle has a different ...

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Hello, IAmMe. Depression is a concept that pops up often in poetry. It makes it very difficult to write about in a new way. The good news is, you have ...

Hello, wholocker! There's an interesting concept behind this, and I really appreciate that it's from the perspective of the child. That being said, there are a few issues with premise. ...

Hello, mollywintz3! Ah, a love poem. I have written many love poems. Love poems are classic and can really show that other person that they've made an impact on the ...

Hello, Cards. This is an interesting poem you have here. I'm not sure I really get the point of it, but it was pleasant to read because of your rhyme ...

Hi there, Meshugenah! Wow, I don't think I've ever reviewed one of your poems before! All I know is that it's fabulous. Which is to be expected of greatness ;) ...

Ooh, Aley, this is so sweet. It makes me want to put heart emoticons all over the review, but I'll refrain. I can personally connect with this story, as I ...

Hello! Your visual descriptions are vivid. Very nice. That being said, there are several things about this that I would change. The first is that this doesn't really go anywhere. ...

Hi Rascalover! It's nice to see someone keeping it simple for once. There are a few things I'd like to suggest that would make this a little better. I'd like ...

Hi, Deanie! All right, so we've got something here. An emotion poem more than a making sense poem, perhaps? A feeling of longing for someone or something that will never ...

Wow, Widders, this is lovely. I am only a fan of villanelles when they deserve fans, and this one does. Technically, it's perfect. You've got iambic tetrameter down to a ...

Hello, Quentin. Oh boy. This one is really loaded with stuff, isn't it? Through all the images and references in this poem, what I'm getting is that the narrator is ...

Hello again. You could easily describe everything here in one or two paragraphs. The cliche "mom is proud of me" is cringeworthy, to be honest, and there's no reason it ...

Hello, Lefty. I'm here to rescue this from the green room. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I know I said it before in another review ...