Moony

okay thanks guys, i will definatly edit this soon but i'm kinda busy. but thanks for your reviews

well it is supposed tobe about the school shootings, but yeah i'm making a story now, so i hope everyone likes it

I have made the story, it is in the other fiction part. it is not qiute done yet.

(*AAAAAAAWWWWWWWSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEE*) i absolutely enjoyed this if I was a real crit, I'd give it three thumbs up(*tee-hee*) we don't have three thumbs)

hum... alot of you say that my poem was great and then there are the ones who say it dragged, it didn't grab their attention, or something else like that ...

hey guys thanks for commenting on this! i finally got a chance to edit the problems and make it longer!! hope you like this and please if it needs something ...

this was very good but i have never seen the movie the brothers grimm soory

i am a harry potter freak i just couldnt get enough of him i hope you continue to write this series!!!!

ok, morgan le fay was merlins baby sister (as written in my story) she has often been said to be a evil witch (in my case i have changed that) ...

this was very very bad i'm sorry but thats my opinion its really rather grose

it doesn't matter when this was posted I like it and its about time it was finally talked about

yeah it looks like the other person's I'll Fly Away

this was a very confusing story why were they underground what did the main characters look like come on we need more imagery but i loved the plot of the ...

i loved please tell me what you made on this essay i'm gonna geusse 100 your imagery is fantastic!!! keep it up!!!

still hooked keep it up!!!