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  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 16 - Sink

    Well, I know that when the verb brings information on the noun you use the hyphen.

    Aug 31, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 16 - Sink

    As far as I know, you need to write it air-cooled because cooled brings information about the air but it%u2019s also the verb of the sentence. So grammatically you are ...

    Aug 31, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 15 - Paper

    I believe you are right. I am sorry for not being very helpfull on that.

    Aug 31, 2020
  • Art » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Love story Chapter 1

    ??

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Art » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Love story Chapter 1

    :)

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: True Meaning of Kindness

    :)

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Comfort

    :)

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The City Bird Tries to Leave

    :)

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Confession Box

    I'm glad that I could help.

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ungifted (Chapter 1 & 2)

    Hi Inaya705, I'm here to review your second chapter. The chapter starts to become more and more interesting. We are learning more about the magic system yet again it feels ...

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ungifted (Chapter 1 & 2)

    I%u2019m glad I helped if I have time I will review the second one as well.

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Clouds of music and Roads of joy.

    Thank you for the review! I%u2019m glad you could relate to the poem. For me is important when people relate to my works. I%u2019ll fix that coma. :) Thanks again

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Clouds of music and Roads of joy.

    Thank you for the review. I%u2019m glad that you understood about the side of the poem that is about suffocating. I love singing along but because I don%u2019t have a ...

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Clouds of music and Roads of joy.

    Thanks for the review! I will try and improve what you pointed out. But sincerly I didn%u2019t intentioanaly created aby kind of rytme. I wanted to be a carfree poem ...

    Aug 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Cold

    From what I lnow it%u2019s grammarly incorect. I might be wrong :)

    Aug 30, 2020


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