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Re: To Know: Part One, Steps 1-4
Hi! I really enjoyed this story. It has nice characters with great personality. My favorite one would be Nora. What was you favorite character while creating them? I'm really curious ...
May 20, 2020 -
Re: Three blank verses
Hi! Hope you're doing great! I like white poems, I write some like this myself. Let's start with the first poem: I thought you first poem had a very interesting ...
May 12, 2020 -
Re: ...
Hey! I enjoyed this chapter as much as the ones before it. I'm glad we are talking about Maria again. I would be very disappointed if we wouldn't hear from ...
May 12, 2020 -
Re: the deep end of the pool is magical
Hey. I really liked your poem. I'm a person who enjoys staying in the water( pool, ocean...). I always seemed to enjoy going on the bottom of it and then ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Hopeless Wishes
Hey. I loved your poem! I thought you said some really beautiful things. My favorite part was " The sun was shy behind your eyes Timid roses were hiding behind ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: ...
Hi(for the fifth time today), I really, really liked the chapter and I want to know what's next so badly! I really liked Maria and I would like to see ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: ...
Hey. Me again. As far as I read this might be my favorite chapter yet. I think the beginning has a good description. You could add a phew more details ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: ...
Hi. So I started reading it from the middle so I continued with the beginning. I liked it as much as I did with the other parts. I did enjoy ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: ...
Hi. As I said on my last review on Part 2.2, it's easy to read which I like. I must agree with @Vita they are oddly calm. I think in ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: ...
Hi. I liked this chapter. It's actually the first one that I read from this novel and I liked it. I thought it was really easy to read and you ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Who
Hi. I think this is a very interesting poem. It's so important to know who we are but sometimes it can be really difficult, almost impossible. I specially like "She ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Keep your heart intact.
I think this is absolutely amazing! Sincerely my main reason I really got into writing it was because I was sad and needed something. This gives you a reason to ...
Apr 23, 2020 -
Re: enter sand man
Hi, I think this is really good. I liked it. I do think it's a little bit hard to understand the first time we read it . But after the ...
Apr 23, 2020 -
Re: me and whose I talk to
Hi, I think this conversation with yourself it's actually really interesting. It's a really strong message you want to share with us. May ask where did you get the inspiration ...
Apr 23, 2020 -
Re: The Weed Within
Hi. I liked your poem. And that's because you had a great mix of vocabulary but you kept the theme. You described something really painful. It was a little bit ...
Apr 23, 2020
