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MoonIris

  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: To Know: Part One, Steps 1-4

    Hi! I really enjoyed this story. It has nice characters with great personality. My favorite one would be Nora. What was you favorite character while creating them? I'm really curious ...

    May 20, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Three blank verses

    Hi! Hope you're doing great! I like white poems, I write some like this myself. Let's start with the first poem: I thought you first poem had a very interesting ...

    May 12, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Science Fiction Re: ...

    Hey! I enjoyed this chapter as much as the ones before it. I'm glad we are talking about Maria again. I would be very disappointed if we wouldn't hear from ...

    May 12, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: the deep end of the pool is magical

    Hey. I really liked your poem. I'm a person who enjoys staying in the water( pool, ocean...). I always seemed to enjoy going on the bottom of it and then ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hopeless Wishes

    Hey. I loved your poem! I thought you said some really beautiful things. My favorite part was " The sun was shy behind your eyes Timid roses were hiding behind ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Science Fiction Re: ...

    Hi(for the fifth time today), I really, really liked the chapter and I want to know what's next so badly! I really liked Maria and I would like to see ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Science Fiction Re: ...

    Hey. Me again. As far as I read this might be my favorite chapter yet. I think the beginning has a good description. You could add a phew more details ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Science Fiction Re: ...

    Hi. So I started reading it from the middle so I continued with the beginning. I liked it as much as I did with the other parts. I did enjoy ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Science Fiction Re: ...

    Hi. As I said on my last review on Part 2.2, it's easy to read which I like. I must agree with @Vita they are oddly calm. I think in ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Science Fiction Re: ...

    Hi. I liked this chapter. It's actually the first one that I read from this novel and I liked it. I thought it was really easy to read and you ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Who

    Hi. I think this is a very interesting poem. It's so important to know who we are but sometimes it can be really difficult, almost impossible. I specially like "She ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Keep your heart intact.

    I think this is absolutely amazing! Sincerely my main reason I really got into writing it was because I was sad and needed something. This gives you a reason to ...

    Apr 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: enter sand man

    Hi, I think this is really good. I liked it. I do think it's a little bit hard to understand the first time we read it . But after the ...

    Apr 23, 2020
  • Art » Dramatic, Theatre Re: me and whose I talk to

    Hi, I think this conversation with yourself it's actually really interesting. It's a really strong message you want to share with us. May ask where did you get the inspiration ...

    Apr 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The Weed Within

    Hi. I liked your poem. And that's because you had a great mix of vocabulary but you kept the theme. You described something really painful. It was a little bit ...

    Apr 23, 2020


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