Monsters

Thanks for the nitpicks, some of them are very helpful Thanks for reading and reviewing

I guess so.

My bad, anyways the way fiend is pronounced makes it not rhyme.

behind, fiend succeeded, nosebleed

I hope your brother knows you are posting this- it is not very ethical to do it without asking. Especially because some people don't want to improve and do not ...

"The piece was okay, but I feel if you added a little more personal touch, and deviated from the common perception, it would be better." Okay happy now?

I do not, DO NOT review mean. I have too much honesty and integrity to tell you I like something that I simply don't. All I ever did was ask ...

Sorry but I am one of the only people here who reviews tastefully. I won't lie to you so if you find it morally correct to be nice and misrepresent ...

cool

Wow, so nice. Thanks for the review !

@WindSailor I cannot reply either. This is to your comment below. After this feel free to discuss it with me in my inbox because I don't want to unnecessarily take ...

Hey, thank you so much for the review! You mean the last three lines as the last stanza correct? I was also wondering if you could explain the expression of ...

I got eye lids @audy but who knows...

Thanks so much for your incite. About the font-- I can't seem to format it correctly so I used the "upload document" and it looks horrendous. Sorry about that. I'll ...

Thanks, as you can probably tell the formatting is pretty bad but I tried