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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy wounds (rough draft)

    I'll be working on this, thank you.

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: Choices

    Hey fortis, thanks for the review. I decided because I respect you as a writer that I would tell you my implied symbols to this, in case you where still ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Moment of Silence

    cool

    Dec 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Monster Who Forgot How Too Monster

    Nov 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: right disasters, you and i

    This is awesome! and it’s in silence we’re always counting This line is a bit confusing. Needs a period or a change from "it's in" to 'in its' ? Just ...

    Sep 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Life Cycle

    Good question. It's not always honest.

    Sep 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: Choices

    What is odd about the descriptions do you think? Thanks for the review.

    Sep 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I thought

    The 'I thought' is not the theme. That shouldn't even be the title because it is not significant to the content. It relies on the repetition of a weak phrase ...

    Sep 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Life Cycle

    Whats wrong with saying that?

    Sep 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Life Cycle

    I am completely "chill". I am sorry for trying to convey what I was thinking about the poem? My bad. Also, don't you think that's the problem; that I don't ...

    Sep 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window

    I think you confuse my honesty with rudeness because you have sentimental value in this poem. However, my intentions were to review you in the best way I know how. ...

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window

    Just because you are a minority does not mean you are wrong, there is a difference between honesty and being rude. Hope you inderstand one day but out of respect ...

    Sep 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Reflections on John 10:11

    villanelle LD, good job. I might review it soon

    Sep 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ..

    A sex offender is a person in a broken system. You get this branding for the weirdest things like peeing outside when no-one is around. There is just so many ...

    Sep 12, 2013
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    Sep 12, 2013


I'll admit the two turtle doves are growing on me, but there are ten birds in this house already and we both know geese are feathered bioweapons of mass destruction.
— Silvern