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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy wounds (rough draft)

    I'll be working on this, thank you.

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: Choices

    Hey fortis, thanks for the review. I decided because I respect you as a writer that I would tell you my implied symbols to this, in case you where still ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Moment of Silence

    cool

    Dec 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Monster Who Forgot How Too Monster

    Nov 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: right disasters, you and i

    This is awesome! and it’s in silence we’re always counting This line is a bit confusing. Needs a period or a change from "it's in" to 'in its' ? Just ...

    Sep 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Life Cycle

    Good question. It's not always honest.

    Sep 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: Choices

    What is odd about the descriptions do you think? Thanks for the review.

    Sep 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I thought

    The 'I thought' is not the theme. That shouldn't even be the title because it is not significant to the content. It relies on the repetition of a weak phrase ...

    Sep 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Life Cycle

    Whats wrong with saying that?

    Sep 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Life Cycle

    I am completely "chill". I am sorry for trying to convey what I was thinking about the poem? My bad. Also, don't you think that's the problem; that I don't ...

    Sep 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window

    I think you confuse my honesty with rudeness because you have sentimental value in this poem. However, my intentions were to review you in the best way I know how. ...

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window

    Just because you are a minority does not mean you are wrong, there is a difference between honesty and being rude. Hope you inderstand one day but out of respect ...

    Sep 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Reflections on John 10:11

    villanelle LD, good job. I might review it soon

    Sep 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ..

    A sex offender is a person in a broken system. You get this branding for the weirdest things like peeing outside when no-one is around. There is just so many ...

    Sep 12, 2013
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    Sep 12, 2013


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