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Re: Happy wounds (rough draft)
I'll be working on this, thank you.
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: Choices
Hey fortis, thanks for the review. I decided because I respect you as a writer that I would tell you my implied symbols to this, in case you where still ...
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: A Moment of Silence
cool
Dec 12, 2013 - Re: The Monster Who Forgot How Too Monster Nov 16, 2013
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Re: right disasters, you and i
This is awesome! and it’s in silence we’re always counting This line is a bit confusing. Needs a period or a change from "it's in" to 'in its' ? Just ...
Sep 19, 2013 -
Re: Life Cycle
Good question. It's not always honest.
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Choices
What is odd about the descriptions do you think? Thanks for the review.
Sep 17, 2013 -
Re: I thought
The 'I thought' is not the theme. That shouldn't even be the title because it is not significant to the content. It relies on the repetition of a weak phrase ...
Sep 17, 2013 -
Re: Life Cycle
Whats wrong with saying that?
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: Life Cycle
I am completely "chill". I am sorry for trying to convey what I was thinking about the poem? My bad. Also, don't you think that's the problem; that I don't ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window
I think you confuse my honesty with rudeness because you have sentimental value in this poem. However, my intentions were to review you in the best way I know how. ...
Sep 14, 2013 -
Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window
Just because you are a minority does not mean you are wrong, there is a difference between honesty and being rude. Hope you inderstand one day but out of respect ...
Sep 13, 2013 -
Re: Reflections on John 10:11
villanelle LD, good job. I might review it soon
Sep 12, 2013 -
Re: ..
A sex offender is a person in a broken system. You get this branding for the weirdest things like peeing outside when no-one is around. There is just so many ...
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