Young Writers Society

take a leave what you will. This poem is ridiculous. Your character in the story gets a question equivalent to "why people are racist" and answers with "well, gee I ...

Hey Lumi, take and leave what you will. Now I want to start off saying a couple of things you probably know but have ignored or neglected for whatever reason. ...

Reviewing this as requested and I have to admit it is pretty rough. Oh God, how do I understand Your unfathomable ways? I am yearning for the One whom I ...

It is no new or wonderous thing for me, with fingers fidgeting against my thighs in anger, to find my way outside, pulling soft clumps of clover and shamrock from ...

Hey firestarter, thanks for recommending me in Reviewer Testimonials. I've been interrupted about 5 times when writing this review the past couple of days so sorry if it doesn't make ...

Hey pocket. The fog tells me about last night. Why mention this if you won't give us details? parts before me, What do you mean by parts? The fog murmurs ...

The purpose of Social media is to increase interaction with friends and family by making it possible at all times and places of the day. This is not a good ...

Hey, Kyllorac. I'm going to walk you through your own story to make a point. However, she was not always a princess. One day, when she was wandering . . ...

This whole poem is a cliche and at times you have moments of originality but they are not developed. For example of originality; and you hair is a beautiful hue. ...

I really do like how you play with the subjective word of free and the literal definition of free in your metaphor. It is that step of precision that makes ...

If you only knew all the secrets I have been keeping I think about them every night while I am sleeping. And out there it seems so clear, But in ...

Hey Deanie, Beautiful people sometimes burn in all their glory. The money rains upon their raised heads, scatters around them and fuels the fire. You say "the money" but you ...

I hope to present my reasons for why I see abortion as a lack of responsibility. Are rape victims irresponsible too? You better prove that, or explain your side and ...

[removed review] it was a little to mean.

Hello ladySpark! You want to be the skinniest, the most flexible, the most beautiful. Why would you be saying that the reader wants to be skinniest, flexible, and beautiful? Be ...