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Re: blinkk.
" She sits astounded from what she has read" well I think it was pretty good it some how reflects on what i have been through you explained how you ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: The Source of Power
hey cory, well i guess i will start by saying that your story is great ... it flows and it keeps the reader wondering whats gone happen next so keep ...
Mar 19, 2008 -
Re: Is a poem to my sister that passed away.
This poem really touched me , it shows your true feelings that you have for your sister, but in the future try to remember to use spell check because i ...
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: First Time
very good and very self- explanitory as you said i knew exactly what you were talking about because of the way your poem was wrote!
Mar 3, 2008 -
Re: My Little Secrets
YOU SAID ALL OF THIS WAS TRUE BUT IM YOUR SISTER AND I AINT EVER HEARD THIS STORY SO WHATS REALLY THE TRUTH?
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: A broken heart.
it was really blah blah... i mean you repeated the same line over and over ... theres no structure whatso ever so its really not even considered a poem so ...
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: A hand takes yours
this was really good i really really liked it
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: Dear Camille
this is nice i think you should start a story
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: Dear Mum
aww... this was really sweet i think you should give it to your mom if you haven't already it would mean so much to her trust me i know
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: Joke. I'm bad with titles, leave me alone! >_<
this made no sense wat so ever to me... it needs alot of reediting it looks like you just jotted something down and decided to post it
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: Children's screams
it was good but i agree with Alainna about making a short story out of it
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: No more crying
this poem was good it really stood out to me
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: I Can't Be Rid of You
it was good... i liked it
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: Just a love song
it was good... it's nice
Feb 29, 2008 -
Re: Song
it was good but you need to consider using spell check
Feb 29, 2008