it was good but you need to consider using spell check
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Best Friends
You and I are best friends
Best friends to the end
From time to time we disagree
but that never stopped us
Are friendship always came first
We shared are secerts with each other
Never hiding anything
Some times I wondered
If you knew more about me
Then I did myself
You were my best friend
I loved you like a brother
You were my best friend
I loved you like a sister
You were always there for me
I will always be there for you
We made are fears disappear
We could almost read each others minds
You were my best friend
I loved you like a brother
You were my best friend
I loved you like a sister
No matter how far
apart we are
You still are my best friend
time_fox wrote:Best Friends
You and I are best friends
Best friends to the end
From time to time we disagree
but that never stopped us
Are friendship always came first
We shared are secerts with each other
Never hiding anything
Some times I wondered
If you knew more about me
Then I did myself
You were my best friend
I loved you like a brother
You were my best friend
I loved you like a sister
You were always there for me
I will always be there for you
We made are fears disappear
We could almost read each others minds
You were my best friend
I loved you like a brother
You were my best friend
I loved you like a sister
No matter how far
apart we are
You still are my best friend
Hey there!
Writing a song about friendship is always great
First of all, as Alainna already pointed out, you need to change some of the 'are's to 'our's:
#1)
Are friendship always came first
We shared are secerts with each other
We made are fears disappear
You were my best friend
I loved you like a brother
You were my best friend
I loved you like a sister
Hi, the concept of this was really good - relate-able.
Are friendship always came first
We shared are secerts with each other
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