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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Wrong Era: Chapter 1

    Thank you for the review! I guess some additional note for the reason why I phrased the casualty part so weirdly is because the World Powers simply assumed people were ...

    Feb 5, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Wrong Era: Chapter 1

    I definitely see what you're saying about this being more of a prologue rather than the start of a chapter 1. I'm just unsure which one to go with at ...

    Jan 30, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (5.2)

    Oh, and a quick clarification regarding Lust's gravity magic. It's less about a force being driven on Cecilia, as it is Lust multiplying the weight of gravity in that specific ...

    Aug 9, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (5.2)

    Hi Knight Hardy! Thank you for the quick review as always! Especially the bit about where to subtly place the info chunk! Changes can be expected within a few minutes!

    Aug 9, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (5.1)

    Hi! Thanks again for the review! :D Here's clarifications for better understanding of the story that aren't spoilers. Power Scaling: Cecilia could in fact take them out immediately by herself ...

    Aug 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (4.1)

    Thanks again for the review! You'll probably see more thanks in the reviews, but I'm going to go over clarifications by reviews since it'll be less confusing and more organized. ...

    Aug 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (3.2)

    Thanks for the tip on the stereotypical accent! I'll be sure to make changes to that when I find the time.

    Aug 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (2.1)

    Hi brotherGeo! Thanks for the review! Especially that last one that you quoted. I haven't looked back since the last review, so thank you for pointing that out! Always happy ...

    Aug 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (5.1)

    XD Wow, I have no idea how else to thank you aside from publishing more of the story. Kattee did the same thing as well, and I'm simply flabbergasted! Expect ...

    Aug 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (5.1)

    Wow, that was fast! I guess I better step up my game and get these chapters out! I say that but I need to review for points, so I guess ...

    Aug 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (4.2)

    :) Thanks again! Revision is going to start immediately!

    Jul 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (4.1)

    Heyyyy! Thanks as always, and for some clarifications for uncertainties that won't spoil the rest of the story! Yes, any super power/quirks that you can think of, there is likely ...

    Jul 16, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (3.2)

    Hey! Thanks again, and I thought I'd let you know that there has been changes made to this section of chapter 3. Nothing major that changes the story or new ...

    Jul 16, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (3.1)

    Another fast review. I can't thank you enough, and will always be thankful in future uploads. Reading positive feedback and concerns such as this is the greatest medicine for slumps ...

    Jul 12, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (1)

    Oh man, I'm gonna need an energy boost or some nono stuff for adults to keep my mind running and innovated. 1. The Karen name change is a dead give ...

    Jul 9, 2020


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