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Hey there Coco! It's Mo, here to review. :D I really like this. I think it's very well written, although I did see one or two errors here and there ...

Hey Sodapop! Just thought I'd drop in for a quick review! :D I absolutely love this! Especially this paragraph: He had discovered a small hill in the corner of the ...

Hi Coco! I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed this yet! I forgot. -.- Woops. This is lovely! I really like this! The only thing I found was that when she ...

Hi, I liked this, and I just thought I give a quick critique. :D I've only really got one problem with it. He carries a container of food I don't ...

Hi Timmy! I liked your poem, so I'm going to write a quick review. I really like this! It's original, and different from most of the stuff I've read on ...

Hey Kayay! I like this poem, and like the others have said it's got a few typos and punctuation errors, so you should juts fix them up. I like the ...

Hey Smiles! This is really nice! ooh, it's so sweet, and happy and sad. awww. I love the relationship between the younger brother and her, he seems so cool! Only ...

Hey there Ben, it's Mo, here to review. Just a heads up, I don't tend to review Non-fiction (as I don't tend to know what to say), and this will ...

Hi Ray! I really liked this poem. :D The only thing I found was a problem in it, was in this line: we are like 2 opposites where without one, ...

Wow. This is really awesome. I love the whole thing! I loved the way the poem developed, for me, it was really easy to understand (which I like, because most ...

Hey there Fatimah! Welcome to YWS! :D This is a good poem, but I agree with Jasmine, the last line's too repetitive, but change that, and this could be really ...

Hey Danie! I'm here to review! (Sorry, it's only short). Wow, I really, really like this. You've really made me want to read more. One little thing I found; It ...

Hey there Danie! I liked this piece. I'm glad that it was a dream though, because it seemed a bit too strange and a bit confusing for it to be ...

Hey Pudin! It's Mo, here to review! :D I really liked this! You've really got me curious as to what happens next. I think that in a few places, her ...

Hey there Ahmed! I'd like to say, that I liked this story. And you have a knack for detail. I really liked the detail you put into everything, but maybe ...