Mizzle

Hi there, Sassykat! ^__^ I step into the night, and let the cold bite my skin. I step into the night, and feel that cold within. I like this, though ...

Hi there, Hibiscus! :) Memory music, we were swaying once away, I don't like the way you phrased this. It made me go back and read it a few times...maybe ...

Hi there, Captain Random, and Captain Random's cousin. Next time when your cousin wants us to review something, he should probably make his own YWS account! It's easier for everyone ...

Hi there! :) Whoa, sounds like a fun camp you went to. What's better than a writing camp, hmm? Anyways, the prompt for this is pretty difficult. 103 words, conflict, ...

Hi there, Heart! I look in the mirror, And who do I see? A pimple faced maniac, With braces on her teeth. I like this, the rhyming doesn't feel force ...

Hi there, Fatimah! :) Everywhere I go, I don't seem to fit in; These two lines seemed really cliche. >.> I feel self-conscious, In the places i'm in. You need ...

Girl: I would love to be a fish, And swim through all the seas! Or be a bird who flies around, And nests high in the trees! Or I'd be ...

Every day i wake up and think DAM SCHOOL, then all of a sudden its the end of the day, Every Monday i think DAM SCHOOL, then all of a ...

Hello there, Lily! Mizzle here, to review this lovely poem of yours. ;) Dark clouds hover above my head Usually I wouldn't like a beginning like this, but it's actually ...

Hey there, Coter! Mizzle here to review. ^__^ Just a quick nitpick before we begin with the full review: Slowly I feel the light go out, As I know I ...

Hi there, Coter. Mizzle here to review. :) Overview: I sit here outside With the smell of salt Gently blowing into my face. This is a really cliched beginning, and ...

Hi there, Baboon! It's Mizz here, as requested && promised. The things in black, bold font are my comments inside the piece. Here's my review, then: Chop I feel like ...

Hi there, Sio! Mizzle here, as requested && promised. This is going to have to be quick, which is just as well because the users before me did a great ...

Hey there, Sio! Mizz here, as requested && promised! Sorry it took so long. If something is BLUE , it means I like it. If something is RED , I've ...

Hey there, Sio! Mizz here, as promised. :) I don't know much about Greek mythology, so bear with me here. Characters: So, I'm just going to say, I love stories ...