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Hi, Rosey! I luffed this! Like everyone else said, this really reminds me of Shakespeare. I'd like to be able to give some constructive criticism here, but you've done wonderfully ...

Hmm. I've never read a poem quite like this. It was nice, but not something I'd expect from you. I can't be too subjective, because I don't really understand what ...

This may sound strange, but I'm not here to review your story. I just wanted to say that I love this, and the other chapters as well. I want to ...

Hey there, it's Mizz, here to review as requested! :D To start off, I liked this. A lot, actually. I just noticed a few problems; I'll just skim over the ...

Hey there, Sage! This is a very nice poem you have. Also--welcome to YWS! I hope you're liking it here. Don't forget, though, that it's better to review at least ...

This was very good! :D Way above what one would expect from a "not-poet." ;) I loved the way this flowed, it has a nice rhythm, so good job there. ...

Aw, Kammie, this is wonderful! Truly and incredibly awesome. I'm impressed. :D So, I loved the story behind this piece. The title made me wonder, and you followed through with ...

Hey there, Fred! :D So, this is a nice poem. I liked it. However, as always, I have just a few nitpicks... 1.) As Child pointed out, on the second ...

Hi there, Jeanette! Welcome to YWS! I hope you are enjoying it here. :D Also, let me remind you, you'll get more reviews on your own work if you go ...

**EDIT: What happened to your story?** Hi there, Sol. Welcome to YWS, by the way! I can see you are a new member. I hope you're liking it here. Don't ...

Hey there, Kota! XD. It's funny to review my sister's work, it really is. Anyhoo. I love this. The only thing I would say is when you say "love so ...

Let the people run and scream, as they chase away their dreams. I sit and watch, dare not to run. Remove "to". For I have a dream that has just ...

Hello there, Mandorelute! I'm Mizz, here to review your poem. Now, my first thought was that this was a little gross--just as Kota pointed out. It makes me wonder what ...

Penetrating the Pale Horse “I hate you , I hate you!” Jonas screamed then stomped to his room. Just a little pet peeve. You needed a comma there, or a ...

Well, Eddie, I think everyone covered what I was going to say here. But nonetheless, I still had to post. This is a real good poem, Eddie, and I'm so ...