Miyakko

Hey paperbackheart, Great poem and loved the journey you took me through. A little constructive criticism? The rhyming made the poem flow really well, but maybe try it without rhyming ...

Hey qaralynn, Great work on this poem. Why your 'words were silent' was made clear in this and it was really well brought across. But while I was reading this, ...

Hey Matthews, Ok, so you've been hammered with lovely constructive criticism, I won't saturate it any more. I thought this was very clever! I loved it. The rhyming worked really ...

Hey TheCircleWriter, Great poem. Short, simple, to-the-point. Very well written. My critique? Throw in a few more descriptive feelings and emotional extremes, then you've really got something going fo

Hey DevanEWilliams, This was a really good poem, I really enjoyed the simplicity of it all. But even though 'Hummingbird' was the poem's title, I think there needs to be ...

Hey LastPaladin, This is all a poem should be and more. Your use of language is great and your poetry is so grand, and honestly, its an honour and a ...

Hey dragonlover92, This was pretty neat. It was short and simple and I think you got out everything you wanted to say without flowing overboard. I think the last two ...

AngelMarie, This is amazingly good. It's very sweet and incredibly expressive, and the use of all those similes was too perfect. Just be careful not to mistake 'to' for 'too'. ...

Hey paintingtherain97, This was great. Really, it was. I can tell you're very passionate about youth issues (so am I) and speaking up and doing something. This is a great ...

Hey pyro, I haven't reviewed in a while, so excuse my forseen roughness! This was fantastic! As AwsomeSocks said, short and too-the-point. You've done a great job with the rhyming ...

Hi! I won't be too nit-picky - it seems KatarinaLatisse has done it! Take her advice, haha. I liked the simple wording in this, I think it worked well, and ...

Hi KnightlyAngel09, This was truly stunning and very beautiful. I thought it was gentle, yet it still had some emotional strength - it wasn't brittle and fall to pieces. I ...

KnightlyAngel09, I thought this was great!It was different, which is what really got me. You were still able to confess and show the feelings of true love, but it wasn't ...

A simple brush to channel the spirit. Mello, I just found this line to be so true. Actually, I've just completed a painting of mine today! (You can see it ...

Hi SakuraFallsSweetly♥, This was really great! I loved how it rhymed and it flowed really well. Maybe you could even push it a bit more, and go a bit deeper ...