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Hey KAH, I really, really enjoyed this poem. Someone said it was very direct, I agree with that. It was so straightforward and wasn't confusing! You got the message out ...

Hi KAH, Really lovely piece! I thought it was pretty good. It wasn't too long and wasn't boring which was what I liked. As some of the others have said, ...

Hi Skins! You say you're not much of a write, but I think your better than you think. Itwas actually pretty good, and the message got through. It was a ...

Hi Yuri! Again, this is another beautiful piece. But I thought some of your other ones were better though, sorry. The visuals in this were amazing, and you described everything ...

Hey ASingleDarkRose, I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was so dark and spooky whilst it rhymed. In a lot of poems, rhyming makes them sound happy and not dark ...

Hi Persephoneia, I loved the depth and meaning of this poem. It was explain so simply but I got the message. The poem had a smooth and very nice flow, ...

Hi AngerManagement, Wow! Yeah, there were a few issues with this poem, but it had a really strong message! The message basically was, its ok to make mistakes and that ...

Hi aspiringauthor17, It was a good poem, but it could be a whole lot better! Reading it was alright, but I'm not really sure what the true story, or message ...

Hi Allmixedup, Firstly, thanks heaps for your birthday wishes - much appreciated! Now onto your poem. I though your poem was good. I liked the rhyming and loved the second ...

Hi SilentRain! I really liked this piece! It totally matched the title "Divine Chaos". I really love the imaginative visuals in this, I love the picture of dragonflies jousting, and ...

SilentRain! I think this may be the first time I've reviewed your work. And what a stunning piece to review! This was a truly heart-felt and deep poem. I agree ...

Hi Kingolions, When I read this the first time, I didn't get it that much and didn't take much of a liking to it. But I read it again and ...

Watchmeburn, I agree with you, I don't think anyone got it too. But, this is because you have not explained this story properly and in full detail. There is absolutely ...

Hi Yuriiko! Wow, loved this poem (just like all your others). I loved the mix of sadness and then happiness and light shining through in the end, it felt...right. I ...

Hey Cap, I thought it wasn't all that bad! Your poems are definitely improving! This, I felt, was deeper than the other poems you've written, and I thought the content ...