Miyakko

Hey ROC, I'm in two minds about this one. I like it more than I don't which is the good thing. It had really good imagery and I liked the ...

Hi KAH! Really lovely poem! I felt as if the poem came from somewhere deep inside you, and that not everything was false, some parts felt true. The topic of ...

Hiya Snoink! What a beautiful little poem! I really enjoyed and savoured every word of it! You described the bluebird perfectly in the first stanza or two, and didn't spend ...

Hey Yuri, I really loved this poem. It flowed nicely, probably because of the rhyming scheme. I really liked the rhyming in this. But maybe change the word "adhere" to ...

Hey Kingolions! I didn't read this, but I'm halfway through the one you printed for me. It's amazing! You've captured everyone's emotions so delicately and beautifully in this. You've captured ...

Hey Kingolions, I enjoyed reading through the darkness of this poem. I especially loved the line: "in a prison of my mind." I'd like some more description about the bridge ...

Hi Watch, This poem is good for a first post. I like the concept of question the subject. But, I'm not entirely sure its a poem. I haven't written any ...

Hey ROC, I liked this piece. I thought some of your other poems were better, but this was nice and simple. It was a good concept, not really a story, ...

Hey Cap! This is absolutely hilarious! I was laughing throughout the poem! It's so funny! It wasn't much of a poem, but it did rhyme, and had a...nice...flow?? For a ...

Hi Cap, These quote are pretty good. The first and last ones were my favourites. I agree with Kingolions, these quotes do make me think a little. The third one ...

Hey Cap, Firstly, I thought the concept was good. It would help if you extended it, and made it about you and someone having a perfect moment together and then ...

Hey Yuri, Pretty good poem! I did enjoy it. It was different to some of the other ones I've read, this wasn't as deep, it was lighter and happier in ...

Hey ROC, It was a good poem. Not too bad. I somewhat agree with the others, it could've gone a bit further - to...somewhere. At the end, it reminded me ...

Hi King, Wow! Another great piece! You should get all your poems published into a book! Seriously. This was so simple and short and wasn't complicated to read. I thought ...

Hey King, LOVED THIS! You said before the poem that the poem wasn't great. I think you're better than you think you are! This poem was AMAZINGLY WONDERFUL! I loved ...