Misty

You say the word "yeah" alot, and I almost felt like this was a song. Last stanza was amazing

you're too good. it's not even fair. it makes me sick, how good you are. SICK, brad!

hmmm...yeah I guess it was cliche. didn't feel cliche when I wrote it though. it felt heartfelt...

I don't know. I think it lacks the specific thing that is giving you all of this confusion. I liked the part *watching as my fingers paint songs*

stunning. Simply stunning. I love it. I'm going to go and write a song about rain now.......(lol)

bahahahahahahaha....sam and black rose, u 2 are funny. Thanks Kylie. Youall, I'm REALLY not feeling this next section. PLEASE give some crit, or just tell me if it sounds ok. ...

although I'm strongly against abortion, Bryant and Natasha sure as hell aren't.

lol

she saw it coming though. and she's a messed up chick.

I didn't crit this? I was sure I had! I printed it off and put it in my binder for god's sake! Obviously I lloved it. I just came back ...

You're absolutely welcome. But while I am intrigued and curious, and while my first crit is always free, the second is not. (What I mean by this is PLEASE PLEASE ...

“Why, exactly, do we have to stop at Safeway?” Bryant asked, annoyed. They had just finished seeing a movie at the mall, and now Natasha was insisting that they make ...

part two of chapter one Natasha threw her purse on the overstuffed gray couch and flopped down gracelessly, brushing a long strand of hair out of her face. With a ...

hmmm....I guess I'm hard to impress today. The last line was sheer brilliance...the rest...well, I don't know, it confused me, but I still liked it to an extent.

*gasps* you have a gift. No, seriously. this is unreal