MissMiaFacinelli

Wow. This was a really awesome poem. Your choice of language really made me think, and I don't think the fact you didn't have a rhyme scheme affected your poem ...

Oh. My. Giddy. Gosh. I loved this npoem - it was incredibly moving. Although simplistic, you managed to convey a real sense of raw emotion. There's just one thing you ...

WOW. A brilliant poem! I have just started studying Romeo and Juliet, and this totally reminds me of it! However, just one little thing to work on - punctuation. Make ...

OK. I really liked this song, it's a good topic to pick - I know how hard it is trying to write when you're not in the mood! However, I'm ...

Firstly... Good job!! I really liked this song!! It has a good rhyming pattern as it is not AABB, like some other songs. However, there should be more obvious gaps ...

Wow. I love this poem - the way you have managed to express such a powerful sense of protection is a few short lines is incredible. I must admit, when ...

OK I like this poem, and totally agree with the point of view of being on the outside looking in. This is really rather like my current story (it's complicated) ...

Hey! OK, I love your poem! It flows so beautifully! But there is just one little thing! Punctuation. Remember a line break isn't a pause, but a comma is. Some ...

OK Firstly, I love your poem. It so totally reminds me of me. I wish I could find the cool, confident person I see behind the looking glass! I like ...

Wow. So, this reminds me a lot of my last story, in which the main character feels intense physical and emotional pain after the love of her life leaves without ...

Wow. I love this poem! It's so... raw, and sort of delicate too. The "drifting first letter" is a kind of bug I've noticed in the Poetry Forums, but it's ...

A mouth Is a slingshot, stretching To the point when the stone Flings. My head bears the marks of these Rocks thrown. OK So the first time I read this, ...

OK So this is a good poem, but I agree with Galerius - the "even" at the start of line 2 is unnecessary - no-one is surprised by the fact ...

He is there for me And I for him He likes me I like him. We have alot in common So we know how to make Each other laugh And ...

Seriously, what is your problem? Twilight has made so many people happy Breaking Dawn isn't even THAT bad There are no sex scenes, just "the morning after" If you hate ...