MissMiaFacinelli

W.O.W. I LOVED this story! It was amazing! Just a single point! Develop your characters fully. Write a profile about them, name, abilities, date of birth, etc. Try not to ...

Hey Kamas! Here, at last, is your review! OK, overall, I can't really jusdge the subject matter, as I haven't read The Scarlet Ibis. However, here are a couple of ...

Hey! So, here I am, ready to review part two! OK, overall, this story is pretty OK. Not really my kind of genre, but I can deal with it. I'm ...

Hi! Here is my review! Overall, quite good. However, here are a couple of little nit-picks ( nit- not nick-) Finally, the girl had put an end to it. What ...

Hi! I'm Mia, and here is my review! OK! I really liked this poem - it flowed nicely, and although I generally prefer a rhyme scheme, the lack of it ...

Hmmmmm... I would definitely have to say "Just In Case" by Meg Rosoff. It's about a psychotic boy who thinks fate is out to get him, so he tried to ...

Hi! I'm Mia! OK, I really liked this story. It made me think about how my dad must feel, as he doesn't live with me. It was so cute! Just ...

Whoa! This is WAY too blocky! I'm not even going to attempt to read this until you have broken up some of the stanzas, and therefore made it a million ...

Hi! I'm Mia, and as you are about to find out, I've never reviewed lyrics before! OK, so The title is good and attention-grabbing. However, in the first verse, the ...

Hi! I'm Mia, and I totally agree with your views on the world! Only one little nit-pick! When first our eyes in this world, I believe that’s the one untainted ...

Hey! OK, so the first thing I noticed about your poem was the title. In particular, the word "atheist" Which is spelt "athEIst" Aside from that, the poem flowed really ...

Hi! I'm Mia, and here is the other review! OK, I don't really like horror movies/TV shows/books, and this was no different. I'm not saying it's bad, I just didn't ...

Hi, I'm Mia, and here is the review! OK, so, overall, a pretty great opening. I was intrigued as to where it was going: the twist was that although I ...

Hi! I'm Mia, and I will be your reviewer today! OK, so I really liked the content of this poem, it had good rhythm and it flowed nicely. But you ...

Hi! I'm Mia, welcome to YWS! OK, I wasn't sure quite what to expect when I clicked on your poem. However, I was pleasantly surprised! This is a very good ...