MissLyricz

Hey there, KalaAngel9! Your story is very interesting and you have left many things secretive throughout the chapter, which leaves it to be more of a mystery at this point. ...

Hey there, GreenTulip! This is a great poem! Well done, my friend! I loved how you described the inner battle and the invisible outer battle of a person. It was ...

Very deep and well thought out poem, my friend! Wonderful piece of poetry, you should be proud of yourself for your efforts! I enjoyed reading it, it was imaginative, symbolic ...

I am rather enjoying your story so far, Stegosaurus, and I must say you are doing an exceptional job of telling such an intense tale with so much lore to ...

Hey there, Amindor! I love this piece of literature, very emotional and quite intriguing. I am almost disappointed that it was so short, I was hoping for more! It appears ...

A very intense and interesting chapter, my friend. Well done! :) Jacob Conner's attitude and impatience is almost humourous and I rather enjoyed the expression of his thoughts. It was ...

Hey there, PancakeandWaffle! (Couldn't decide which was better: the pancake or the waffle? I understand the struggle, it's so hard to decide!) Anyway...getting down to business. I am rather enjoying ...

Hey there, ButtercupRose! The name's MissLyricz and I'm here to review your story so far! :D First of all, your main character is very real and quite likeable. You've given ...

Hey, JoyTheBrave! Love your username, by the way! Anyway...getting down to business. I've done a few reviews, so I believe I'm finally getting the hang of it, but if it's ...

This is a very well-written short story! You should be very proud of your work, WaltzingDreams! I'm still getting the hang of writing reviews, so if it's not according to ...

Very well-written, emotional, quick and to the point and not to mention good character introduction. I think it was a very good idea to write the story from Ellie's point ...

The first thing that drew me to your story was the title: it's clever because it certainly intrigues the possible reader and encourages them to read it. The way you ...

Hey there, tigeraye! This chapter is very well-written and it was an exceptional read! One of the things about your writing that I have labelled as one of your key ...

Very well written and the events and circumstances for Toby and his family are just awful, but highly realistic. I liked how you brought a little light hearted humour to ...

Very powerful, deep and meaningful. It was a good idea for you to mention the story of Dr.Pam and how Toby's dad had died. What you have chosen to write ...