MissGangamash

Happy Review Day! So, I'm incredibly confused. First, the dialogue at the beginning should be set apart. "C'mon, Eve, it'll be fun!"' Eve is not the one saying this so ...

Wow, this is really lovely. I feel that the tone is accepting which makes the poem very moving. This person accepts that their love has this horrible illness but just ...

This is pretty dark and I love dark reads! I agree with Pompadour, the sentences are all very similar. I think you use commas too much. You seem to use ...

Wow, very creative! I like how simple the story is and the repetition, it keeps it flowing. You also rounded it off well with the ending mirroring the beginning. This ...

I like that the title makes you expect something different. It misdirects the reader into thinking it is going to be something sweet, yet maybe it is. The narrator sure ...

Happy Review Day! I like what you did with this, its very humorous. You did stumble a bit with the metaphor of 'face' being a country. 'That arose somewhere is ...

This is something a lot of people can relate to, me included. I still find it incredible how people work. Even when I think I understand them, they do something ...

I am finding so many good words as I review! Limerence! Ah, fantastic. I feel my vocabulary expanding. Anywaaayyyy, great poem. I loved the imagery of the wounded fawn, and ...

You have written from a little girl's perspective really well. I liked the part when she said that people say she looks like her parents but not like herself. I ...

Happy Review Day! I am in two minds about this story. There is a lot of grammatical errors that make it difficult to read. The jumps between past and present ...

From the title I knew what this was going to be about but it didn't stop it being heart breaking. I'm pretty rubbish when it comes to commenting on poetry ...

"Hands up, clones" - should be a comma before clones. You've missed it out a lot. I'm guessing Hutteze is a language so it should have a capital letter. "Bane ...

Happy Review Day! I enjoyed this piece, I like quite blunt humour. Your writing style flows really well and your descriptions are great. The way you brought in other information ...

Hello again! Here to review your next chapter. Again, I love the relationship between Aoife and Oisin, it seems very genuine and realistic. What I didn't understand was Aoife's lack ...

I'm here! First of all, the protagonist in my novel's called Evie so that's kinda awesome. Now, onto the review! This is a little too teen-fiction for me to get ...