MissCaroline

This is so beautiful. I could relate to this poem very well. I loved the line breaks and everything about this poem. The analogies were perfect and fit the poem ...

Aww, thank you so much!!

Thank you. :) I'll rewrite that scene for a little bit of a clarification. :

Thanks! :)

You should read the Harry Potter series. ;)

He/she copies everyone's reviews.

Thank you for copying exactly what carbonCore wrote.

As soon as I read "Jesus trolled me today.", I knew this was going to be good. This was written very unusually and I liked it because of that. The ...

Do you always copy others' reviews and post them as if they were your own?

Oooh, very eerie poem! :) I like it! The second stanza was descriptive and it gave me a great visualization. I also liked your choice of words, such as "rancid". ...

I remember I had to do one of these types of poems for school. :) Mine was about the day of Thanksgiving. It was really fun to write, but I ...

Ooooh! Eerie! I really liked the description you gave. :) "Her scuffed brown boots" "Her dull brown pony tail" Very nice work. The only thing I would suggest is to ...

Hey adistopper. :) Firstly, thanks for the flattering review. I was just curious as to what kind of vocabulary modifications you were thinking. I would be entirely satisfied if I ...

"I’ve always had trust issues. I just bottled stuff up. It was better that way- for everyone. I didn’t want anyone to worry about me. My problems were my own ...

Very nice poem. :) I'm not really one for poetry, but I very much so enjoyed this.