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Re: I Love You More
I like the poem . great feeling , well written and good emotion in it :) great job :)
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: If I Must Die
This is a great poem has a great meaning and makes you think about life. I am not good at reviewing mistakes in the poems but i really liked the ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Yesterday
i love that this poem is simple ,beautiful and really has the great emotion in it cause a good friendship is hard to find and once you have lost it ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Snow Flakes
nicely written :) and creates a true winter and christmas feeling good job :)
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Love came here to stay
:D Hey I like it a lot this is good Cant wait to read your other lyrics in the future :D
Sep 15, 2008 -
Re: new hope.
Nicely done I like it and these are my favourite lines :D Winds sweep Waters flow Oranges paint the sunset Love paints the heart
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Rain!
I like it a lot specially these lines: Rain Oh wonderful rain, How I love thee! Sitting in the house all day Watching people on the roads flee. Some people ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Back again
:D well written has really good rhythm in it Spinning around never touching the ground fighting and pushing for more. Fire inside flame burning wide soul and mind are one. ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: home is where the heart is
That`s a wonderful poem It has such a good meaning I know I should be critical too but I`m not very good at it :D Home is where the heart ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: I Love You
Its so good I really love its so emotional and kinda dreaming Truly good beginning I envy that guy you told Gerald about because he some how caught your affection. ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Cloud Dreams
Many days go by, Flying it seems, To touch the sky. I’m living for today, Waiting for tomorrow and Remembering the yesteryears gone by. Dreams flow around me, Leaving me ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: "I am a person too"
Amazing peace. I mean when I think about the people who are different then they just need to be taken as a totally normal and talented people too. Because actually ...
Sep 13, 2008
