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Re: Death and Destruction [Ch. V, Nine]
First off we’re not gonna breeze past the Hitler quote because that! Is an incredibly weird thing to do! I see it’s a quote from the story but I gotta ...
Jun 29, 2024 -
Re: Neglect, regret, and death
Alright first I need to take a minute to give you my perspective, then we can approach the literature. Our nonhuman family is just that. Just as we neglect and ...
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Re: my little sister and i
This piece made me think and feel so many things. I think you beautifully touched on the themes of family and the individual, how your relationships change with the years ...
Jun 28, 2024 -
Re: Saving George
Hello! I’ll be going chronologically and adding to my review as I read. I don’t think it’s necessary to have an introduction for such a short chuck of story. I ...
Mar 21, 2024 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 35
Hello! I’ll be going chronologically and adding to my review as I read. My review is just of this chapter so if I say something incorrect given context please forgive ...
Mar 21, 2024 -
Re: Zombies of Mariesville | Three
Hi! I'll be going chronologically with this review, as always take what's helpful and leave the rest. I'm mostly going to focus on clarity and readability, and other things when ...
Mar 7, 2024 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 34
Hi! As always with any review take what you want and leave the rest! I’ll be going in chronological order with my review. To start off with, your opening line ...
Mar 7, 2024 -
Re: Why do I have to love you? (Denise’s song) (reprise)
The phrasing of you never were the best reminds me of Ultraviolence Era Lana Del Rey. “ It’s not my fault you were stupid. It’s not my fault you were ...
Mar 2, 2024 -
Re: Chapter Four: Trigger
Ok I’m going in chronological order so if I neglect to remove anything that is answered later in the chapter my apologies! First off I have to say the song ...
Mar 2, 2024 -
Re: Celia meets the magician!
Hi! I’m still figuring out the best way to write my reviews so please bare with me! This will be mostly in chronological order, addressing other things when it’s relevant. ...
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Re: The Drip Finally Stopped
There are a lot of different ideas and things touched on here, so I first want to pull out some lines that struck me and then look at those broader ...
Jan 13, 2024 -
Re: until tomorrow comes, again.
I really enjoyed this poem. It didn’t give things away too quickly, despite being relatively short. The “it makes me wait” is very intriguing, I want to know what you’re ...
Jan 13, 2024
