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First thoughts is " dang this is long!" But it's good! Your use of punctuation was phenomenal and its a beautiful poem! Your rhyme scheme is good and your use ...

Great poem just make sure you use stanzas because it makes it out as a poem but I don't mind that to much. It was very melancholy and sad but ...

This was a great poem. The short an articulate lines in your stanzas are very grabbing. The adjective you used fit well and the poem flowed well. It was very ...

Neonmask this was an awesome poem. The length of the lines is a bit long. The only thing I would do is shorten them a little. In some of the ...

I love this poem. It was really well written and flows well. And yea I realize that I'm way later to review but I still wanted to :). This poem ...

That was a great poem :) it was really deep and cool. The use of adjectives was beautiful and created great imagery. This was really great and I really enjoyed ...

Hey just before I start I am no poem expert but I really enjoyed your poem. It was simple and really emotional. Like stated in other reviews your spelling although ...

Wow. That was a great poem! The only thing I caught was that eerie was spelled wrong... Each stanza told a different story and it was very intriguing, but kinda ...

Very sweet poem :). I liked how you compared something tangible And something that you can only feel in your heart. I found it to be a very good poem ...

This was a great poem but the rhymes sometimes just didn't do it for me. It's probably just me though and it's a fantastic poem. I like the point you ...