Mikko

Hey there! This is a cute and simple little poem and you're right that it's not the best poem ever but it's the expression of how/what you feel and I ...

This is a lovely poem and I also enjoyed reading it! It flowed really well and the rhythmn was kept constant. Though you did sneak in a rhyming pattern that ...

Spaaaaaaark! This is a beautiful song and it's touching because sometimes I wish I could go back to those times too. I especially love verse 3 and I can shamelessly ...

Hey Smurf! Ok, first I'd like to say that I'm honoured that I inspired you for writing this! I'm just going to go through the nit-pricks to help you make ...

Well, I guess all the helpful reviews have been done already so I'll just comment on how the poem made me feel. First of all sorry for your granny and ...

Jack and J ill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water. Jack held J ill down, by her crown, until she was fully under. Up J ack ...

I like this poem because it's different to those 'love poem' people write (me included... *ahem*). I really feel the narrator's emotions through the tone of the poem. I'm guessing, ...

CAPTIVATING! I loved it and I can't wait to read more! I like how original this is because depression and suicide stories are usually about girls and I just love ...

Hey there! First of all, I'd like to say this is very well written especially because I see that you were trying to write it as a haiku- well done ...

This sory is awesome! Oh pancakes! You're making me lack vocabulary! I'm sure you did this on purpose because after reading this, all you can do is say "Awesome, awesome, ...

I love this. I love how it's so heart-felt and that many, many peole can relate to it. My sisters and I love Harry Potter so much that we too ...

This was a lovely poem considering the sad events in England. Thank you for writing this because it just somes up my views on today's society. I love the pictures ...

This was nice and had a very powerful feel to it. There were only a few little things I thought you might want to edit (or not, your choice). The ...

Hey Panda! This was nice little piece made of just a conversation between two people, though I must admit that I was a bit confused- especially at the beiginning but ...

Maybe one day I 'll look down the memory lane And say : It was a teenage thing . But right now , It hurts so much i can ' ...