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Re: Life
Here there! I'm here as requested! I think this is a nice little poem you have here. Let me start by saying welcome to YWS, again! Now on to more ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: I'm Sorry, I Have Lost My Mind
Oh my gosh! Ya soshla s uma is one of the songs I love! All the things she said in English. I've listened to both, like you said, back in ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: The Free Slave Part 1
Hey there Pix! This is quite an interesting piece you have here but you need to touch up on a few things. A LOT of things, actually. Red is for ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: It's not easy to say.
Oh Anna-Spark! This is really touching and it brought a huge smile to my face. You're great and eventhough, like you said, it contains clichés, I don't care because I ...
Oct 21, 2011 - Re: Mirror Mirror on the wall, who is the fairest one of all? Oct 19, 2011
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Re: Already Fallen
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I am happy to read you first posted work and I have to say that I quite liked it! Here is a review to help ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: An Almost Love Story
Hey there Blue! This, I have to say, got me thinking! And when I read it again I was like "Oh!" *palm/face* Yeah. So I see the 'two' as once ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Walking Home
*Claps* Brilliant! I love your style! This poem is really unique and I just have to say that I survived it because it really grabbed me. I even have special ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: One day
Hey there Pix! Ihope everything's alright between us now! I came to review your poem. SO here goes... If one day I bec a me queen I'd climb up the ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Keep Your Hands off My Heart
*Writes her name on Qactus' heart* HAHA! What are you going to do about it? You can't do anything because you love Aunt Mikko!
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Shall We Play a Game?
I really like this peom! The emotions you bring out through your words really penetrate through my skin just like the blade you're describing. It reminds me of a poem ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: A Hand to Hold - A 7/7 memorial
I like this! Especially because I haven't seen anyone on here remembering 7/7! Thanks for posting this! I remeber that day I was at school and they had just annouced ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
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Boo, you missed a spot. Here let me add some little corrections: I'm In A Room, and I Can't Get Out. Trapped. Nobody Can't Hear Me Nobody can hear me? ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Insecurity
This is a really nice song and it reminds me of just what the person in your avatar would write! I love her too by the way! Ok, on to ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Love. It's all i think about!!
This was a nice and simple little poem. Very quick but there's nothing wrong with that. THIS made my day (my night actually...) Just realized i effed up the rhyme ...
Sep 9, 2011
