Mikko

Hey! I like you poem! Short and simple but the rhyme makes it cute and reminds the reader that it's about when you were young. Apart from that, I don't ...

It's a good thing you didn't manage to make those three words come together with the rest of the poem because I like this structure. It somehow add effect to ...

Hey skermitz! I enjoyed reading your poem, it made me feel like dreaming away like you! xD Anyway, I like the ryming pattern and the flow of your poem and ...

I like your poem because I am also familiar with the same scenarios eveyday! Nothing much to say, only try capitalising-- A s the lockers. That are now a corroded ...

It's good, I don't know why you're disappointed with it. I only have two things to correct: Tears of joy or t ears of sorrow? I was not sure. There, ...

I really like rewritten classics, and I enjoy reading yours! I think the beginning ressembles 'Cinderella' though, but it's O.K. I have only one problem apart from that it's: It’s ...

Arrgh! I've reviewed this twice already but I keep losing it! I’ve been busy with exam revision too. Anyway, I'll try again hoping I won't lose it this time! Comments ...

Is this the summer before 5th year? OK, once again, Lily has to tell the reader why she's jumped from 3rd year to the end of 4th... I love the ...

I have to say that I TOTALLY agree with seeminglymeaningless : Your work needs a lot of grammatical changes! (Sorry). When I read your post about what the story was ...

You were right to not give this a particular subject, or to tell the reader what it is about because that is the art in it. I really like this ...

Ooh! I see Lily is starting to get the "Teenage Bug"! Just like Hermoine in book 3 :) Ok, so she hasn't written for about two years and I think ...

Even if this is a topic written on often, I like it and love the way it's written. My favourite stanza is : 'Cause there will never be an “Us”, ...

I think you shouldn't just leave it like that, you should carry on! It's good (for something done in 45 mins :P). But seriously, you should carry on. By the ...

So first of all, welcome to YWS. Your poem is nice as many people have had this experience of not knowing love. I just though that there were a few ...

Oh my goodness! A trailer for a novel? It's REALLY good; not just the trailor, but the plot of your story, it really made me want to read it. You ...