Mikayla386

It's scary how true this is.

Hey, so I really like this. I love the flow it has. The only things that I would change are adding a little more description and adding to the narrator ...

Wow, just wow. That is a lot of emotion and a lot of feelings in one poem. I love it. The only changes that I would make are not changing ...

Wow, I love all the description in it. I love how you describe the wind, and what it's like on the balcony especially. The only things that I would change ...

@winter257 @micosoul @thedumbbruntte00 I have posted the second pert of this, so if you would like to go read that. This chapter will make more sense once you've read part ...

Well then. I love how unique it is, there is literally nothing like it. It can relate to everybody, because it's not just about one specific thing. As well I ...

Wow, just wow it was, despite its size, really moving. It did get slightly repetitive, but besides that it was really good.

I love your poem, it actually reminds me a bit of me and one of my friends that I have actually had a crush on for awhile now.

I loved all the description in the beginning, but towards the end it gets a bit confusing, besides that and the few typo I loved it, -Kay