MidnightVampire

i've got a little annoyance with this, how the child thought 'Oh my god' when I've never heard a six year old say it. just something that really annoyed me. ...

This was wonderfully creepy, just my type of book to read. I must agree, though. The names confused me, unless they're explained later on or earlier in the book, it's ...

This rocks. Sorry for the really really sucky critique, but I've got a project due soon, so I can't give the best crit.

Thats sad. I also don't like rapers. still, looking foward to next chapter

Ack! It's spam! Some punctuaton would make this poem a lot easier to read (also taking away the caps.)If you put a little rhythm in this (as someone already mentioned), ...

This was an ok piece, had nice imagery. The ending was a little off, and seemed to through the poem in a different direction. Change the ending to something that ...

this is good, I'd watch your spelling, because its a little harder to read. It brings a new meaning to M.I.A., i think it would be nice if you could ...

I liked this poem, its hard to reach a vagueness, but still have reality. And, yes, I have had a vivid nightmare. quite frequently, actually. Keep writing poetry, ~MV

This was hillarious...*almost dies laughing*

Funny!

this was soo funny! Though I have seen some bad poetry, this was the worst. which is ok to say, since this is what you were goin for.

Thanks! That gave me happiness in this day that isn't the best .Still trying to make it better though.

sweet sweet revenge

That was really really stupid. Yet, very very funny. Made me laugh.

Wow. This is really good. About a girl with bulimia, right? This flows really well, has a point, and has repitition (which is something I really love). Please continue to ...