MichaelRV

this is reallllllllyyyy creepy, and gave me chills while I was reading it. I like the description throughout the story, and like how the angel describes the small child and ...

this is great, and I'm really glad that you published it. I like how the overall mood of the story/letter is that of a longing wife who just wishes for ...

talk about a misleading title! It works just so well when trying to draw readers into it. The story itself is extremely well thought out, all the way down to ...

this is a very shocking blurb of writing. Blurb because it's so short. Shocking because I would never have guessed the ending to it. I like almost everything about it...except ...

this is a very good poem. It most certainly has a lot of rhyming in it though. It is the rhyming though, that really makes the poem as a whole ...

this is pretty strange, but still really cool. I like how you used flashback throughout the story to slowly make everything make sense. It really makes the difference in the ...

this is amazing! To take things that seem completely innocent, and then changing them into the strangest monsters ever seen is all it takes to give people chills. I was ...

I'm left in awe at this piece of poetry. Now, I don't usually look for poetry that involves love, but the title on this piece drew me in like the ...

This is a great essay. I like how you not only share your own personal experience, but the experience of someone else (in this case, Jeremiah). I hope you get/got ...

This poem is great! It reminds me of my own friendships. The part where you talk of the "peanut butter to my gum", actually reminds me of the time when ...

This is amazing. I don't usually like to read love anything, but this is something amazing. It touches my heart, and even makes me reflect on my own friendships. I ...

I agree. Although schools can be cool if you think about it. It just depends on how you look at it. For example, I look at school in a positive ...