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Thanks a lot for all reviews.

Thanks a lot Lava.

Is there a prologue for this or this is where it starts from. PM me and tell.

It got featured. Wow!!!!

Hi. there's a lot of confusion here. I will try read it tomorrow but for now here are some mistakes. That’s when it happened, a sound like t hat of ...

Thnak you a lot Ben.

Can you rate it because generally your stories are 16+ or 18+.

Thanks Napalmerski......This would help a lot..

Thank you both of you. I owe a lot to you all.

Great job Trace! I loved the paragraph. I think you should submit it somewhere with little bit of improvement and editing. It really gave me a lesson. A perfect thing ...

Thanks Lava for coming up to review this piece. I have edited it. I wrote: Why did he always want insane people on his force? Lava wrote: He wants insane ...

Whats the rating for this? I really want to read this up.

Yes, Twilight is doubt about it but its highly overrated which is hiding the work of other great and influential writers.

It is so creative and I couldn't find any errors. keep writing. Are you continuing it?

Thnakj you. I will PM you with future editions.